The war in Colombia has been going on for more than fifty years. Bogota is also the capital of Colombia which happens to be a big area of the war. Poverty is a huge reason that the war is going on mainly so that their cocaine, and weapons and arms dealings can grow larger. Children are effected each day during this war, some are kidnapped and some are forced into the war. At this point Colombia is a war zone, and not the best place to be.Monday, October 20, 2008
What I Know About Colombia
The war in Colombia has been going on for more than fifty years. Bogota is also the capital of Colombia which happens to be a big area of the war. Poverty is a huge reason that the war is going on mainly so that their cocaine, and weapons and arms dealings can grow larger. Children are effected each day during this war, some are kidnapped and some are forced into the war. At this point Colombia is a war zone, and not the best place to be.
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Poverty is a huge reason that the war is going on so that (add word here?)their cocaine, and weapons and arms dealing.
This sentence looks like it could be a really good complex sentence if you edit it. Maybe add a word or two to make it make sense.
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